In the last two months, I showed you some guitar tips for songwriters. In this issue, I'd like to talk more directly about the art and craft of songwriting itself.

I've critiqued thousands of songs over decades of workshops and affiliations with songwriters organizations. A few were great, many were bad, but the biggest disappointments are the tremendous amount of songs that were just "ok", when a little more consideration to detail might have put them into the "pro" column.

Here's a sample chapter from my upcoming book, "Songwriting In 3-D" to give you a simple guideline that can instantly enhance your lyrics.

There's an old expression, "The Devil is in the details". You might spend hours, days, or months slaving over a legal pad trying to replicate your deepest thoughts and feelings , but if you want to communicate effectively, you've got to Put Your Song In My Shoes! -- make me feel like I'm going through the same or a parallel experience.

I often see well intentioned lyrics where the narrator pours out his emotions to his beloved:

"And when I look into your eyes,
I get this feeling deep inside,
The funny little things you do,
They keep me so in love with you"...

Maybe you wrote it for your best gal as a Valentine's Day surprise. It's sweet, but the images are all Internal. These characters, events, and emotions are vivid in your mind -- you've lived and relived them over and over again. But I don't live inside your head -- I live in the External world, and you can't assume that I see and feel everything you do.

I need details! What did you see in her eyes? -- anger? ... a twinkle of romance? ... bloodshot? What did you feel deep inside? -- love? ... sorrow? ... acid reflux? What funny little things does she do? -- put love notes in your lunch box? ... fart in bed? Don't expect me to know all the quirky little things that make your relationship special; you've got to tell me -- better yet, show me -- through strong, visual, emotional lyrics. Try changing, "I look into your eyes" into something like:

- "I look into your ... sweet / laughing /sad / sexy / troubled / mysterious / crystal blue / deep brown / dark Cajon .... eyes"

... or change, " I get this feeling deep inside" to:

- "I feel ... so in love / blessed / like I'm falling in love for the first time"!

When you say something like, "I feel like I'm falling in love for the first time", it creates a bridge between your story and my mental and emotional database -- the sights, sounds, smells, and feelings from my past. Our characters and settings might be different; you kissed Betty Lou under the tree in Little Rock; I made out with Rhonda in Brighten Beach, Brooklyn, but we can still relate to each other's "Strawberry Wine" moment.

The moral to the story:
When you Externalize your lyrics, you help the listener process the information Internally, making it his or her own.

If the Devil's in the details, then Go Out and Write One Hell of a Song!

To learn more about Denny, songwriting, guitar performance, and "LICK*TIONARY - The Songwriter's Guide to GREAT Guitar!" or to get 2 free chapters from his upcoming book, "20/20 Songsight - The Common Sense of Songwriting"
Please visit: www.dennysarokin.com
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